Writing

Friday 28 February 2025

We are preparing to write a spooky story based on the online video: Alma.

https://www.literacyshed.com/alma.html

The children were instantly hooked in and have shown lots on enthusiasm towards their work.

As we work towards our final written piece, we have been learning how to link clauses using dashes, semi-colons and colons.

How to use dashes:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCg860btDfg

How to use semi-colons:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XcpaQc8VbU8

How to use colons:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s2iYA1sQUZQ

Here are some examples of our work:

She looks at the doll – the doll stares back. Honey.

Alma stared at her Doppel-ganger; the doll looked back at her with a creepy smile. Amelia.

Alma tried the door – it was bolted shut. How would she get in? Madeleine.

Alma looked at the clone; it glared at her like it was ready to fight. Kamile.

The chalkboard, filled with names, determined the next victim – Alma wrote her name beautifully. Summer.

As she peered through the frosty window, the doll-twin stared at her – it was as if they knew each other. Valerie.

The doll was an exact relica of her: green eyes, blue hat, pink gilet and red scarf. Chloe.

Alma knew she was alone; so she thought. Aubree.

Help at home – Ask your child to describe when they would use a dash/semi-colon/colon. Can they give an example? Role play them teaching you how to use them. Write spooky sentences using this week’s spellings.

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